Check out my new video! Truancy: NY

So this was my final for one of my classes at school, I am looking for feedback that could be helpful in making me a better filmmaker. I used the Sony Fx 2000 to film this piece, some scenes used a light kit (Pro Lights Two Light Kit). I edited this piece using Final Cut X, I usually use Final Cut 7 but I figured I would give it a shot.

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