CONNERY | A Short Film

Kim Welch

Senior Member
Staff member
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Jared Isham

Moderator
Looks great. Some suggestions would be to cut the opening scene a little shorter. Get to the sugar in the coffee a bit sooner and just a tighten up on the rest. It takes a little too long for me to get to the point of what is happening.

Great job though. The cinematography looks great and the story is intriguing!
 
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