Unproduced short film screenplay ripe for production

andre

New member
Hi. I'm new to these boards so I'll try my best to give a fellow newbie the proper respect he deserves :). I read your screenplay and I liked it. Interesting idea. However, the final monologue does seem a bit too long and I realize that's the point but there are some bits that could definitely be snipped. All in all, it was an interesting concept. Nice job.
 
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